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Less Praise, More Help

The rain was mild,

The road travelable

Until a monster

storm unleashed its rage,

The river overflowed

It’s bank with undertows

Dragging the SUV down,

as it began to float.

First responders arrived.

It took awhile.

The driver yelled for help

To save his wife and children.

Onlookers stood safe onshore,

threw ropes across the heaving waters

Until the father begged for more.

He threw a child through

the narrow window opening.

“Please help my child. Now,

please now, before he sinks.”

A raft was thrown

Which none could reach.

More calls for help,

As blankets were stacked ashore,

and life-rings propelled.

People gathered and shouted,

“How brave you are being!

How well you are doing!

We thought you would have sunk

long before.”

He called for help, more desperate now.

Asking the responders to come

into the water to save

His sons and daughters.

But, they refused with worried frowns

That they could not enter the river.

It was not allowed.

What reasoning is this?

What conscience allows

A nation to drown as we watch

Shouting the words “ How brave!”

How wondrous you stayed afloat so long.”

Stood there saluting on the bank

as the car sank.

Hoping the river’s flow

Would slow,

before all hope was lost

For those in the car

and those on the shore.

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